“…in order to convey the feeling. It should be precise about the thing and reticent about the feeling, for as soon as the mind responds and connects with the thing the feeling shows in the words; this is how poetry enters deeply into us.”
Wei T’ai (eleventh century)
When I am stirred to write a poem, though it is likely sourced in an emotion, I do not say “I feel angry” and then “I feel sad” or “I feel uncertain”. In poetry, I speak figuratively. I relate the thing (whether it be an incident, a circumstance, an encounter, a person, a metaphor, whichever) and then, when a poem is written from the depth of this connection, it shows the feeling without naming it. It rouses the reader to his own corresponding feeling.
Any good work of art connects the viewer to the feeling behind it. A garden, a sculpture, a painting, a poem, prose, etc.
Meeting Someone New
© by Christine O’Brien
He wore a green raincoat
he, a huge forest
his face, the sun rising over the trees
open and casting its
smiling beam on me
as if we were old friends, familiar.
He opened the conversation
as if it were a continuance
of a suspended dialogue.
I whirled towards him
being drawn to sun, warmth, openness
and fell into his face
like a cushy bed with lots of pillows
then suddenly realized
“I don’t even know you!”
Felt myself flailing, directionless
seeking the friend
I had walked into the café with
solid turf, reliable old shoe.
I knew he wanted to continue
take me to his beach
and slather sunshine like lotion
on my bare body
which all too eagerly sheds inhibitions
and wants to trust this forest of a man
with the sunshine face too soon.
I wrestle with the confusion
of this odd familiarity
as I stumble backwards into safe shade.
FOR YOUR CONTEMPLATION:
Time for a poetry break. Do you have a book of poetry lying around? Is there somewhere for you to sit quietly and read poetry? Indoors or outdoors? Read the poetry for your enjoyment at first. Then, contemplate a few poems to see if and how they “convey the feeling” by “presenting the thing”.
NOTE: Poetry, by its nature, is meant to be shared (when the poet is ready to take this leap). Poetry is humanity’s connective tissue. Poetry has the capacity to cross cultural, spiritual, gender and boundaries of time, etc. Recently, someone said the same thing of music. I agree.